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Apocalypse Tribe HQ _ The Apocalypse Bar _ Give Me Your Hand
Posted by: Layrinn Sep 27 2003, 04:25 PM
Wow, I got hit with some serious inspiration today... I created this pic from scratch, start to finish, in just a little over four hours. o.O
And for the first time ever, I'm actually happy with how the face turned out. ^.~
Posted by: Knightsword Sep 27 2003, 04:31 PM
Nice work Rinn, keep it coming
Posted by: Khaotika Sep 27 2003, 04:36 PM
Yikes, those eyes are scary! O_o; To make them a lil less scary, lighten up the black lines on the bottom part of the lash, and add eyelids covering a small portion of the top part. I'd add a little more shading on the arm, right now it looks like she's breaking it to reach out her hand.
Nice legs!! *slaps the ass*
-Khao
Posted by: DarkEpyon Sep 27 2003, 04:39 PM
Once again, another bang-up job.
Posted by: Layrinn Sep 27 2003, 05:12 PM
| QUOTE (Khaotika @ Sep 27 2003, 04:36 PM) |
| Nice legs!! *slaps the ass* |
*o.O*
Take it easy there, tiger... ^.^;;
Hehe, seriously... thanks for the advice, Khao... =)
Have another look and see if you think the eyes are any better. I may give the eyelids a try later, but to be honest I'm afraid if I screw with the pic much more, I'll end up messing it up. ;p
I'm not sure what you're getting at about her arm... could you explain a little further, please?
Thanks again for the advice... I'm greatful for all the help I can get. =)
Posted by: Khaotika Sep 27 2003, 05:19 PM
| QUOTE (Layrinn @ Sep 27 2003, 06:12 PM) |
| [QUOTE=Khaotika,Sep 27 2003, 04:36 PM] Have another look and see if you think the eyes are any better. I may give the eyelids a try later, but to be honest I'm afraid if I screw with the pic much more, I'll end up messing it up. ;p I'm not sure what you're getting at about her arm... could you explain a little further, please? Thanks again for the advice... I'm greatful for all the help I can get. =) |
Oh yeah, much better. These eyes have a nicer, more "come hither" look to them.
As for the arm, it's a little hard to explain. Take a few steps away from the screen and you might see what I'm talking about. The perspective is a bit off, due to lack of shading on parts of the arm. Around the elbow is where I'm mainly focused. She is supposed to be sticking out her hand at the viewer, but the shading isn't strong enough for it. The arm looks like it's deformed a little, and she's draping it to her side, while extending her hand. A little darker shading on the palm of the hand where it naturally creases doing that gesture also couldn't hurt.
*pinches ass* :o
-Khao
Posted by: Layrinn Sep 27 2003, 05:32 PM
| QUOTE (Khaotika @ Sep 27 2003, 05:19 PM) |
| *pinches ass* :o |
>.>;;
| QUOTE |
| As for the arm, it's a little hard to explain. Take a few steps away from the screen and you might see what I'm talking about. The perspective is a bit off, due to lack of shading on parts of the arm. Around the elbow is where I'm mainly focused. She is supposed to be sticking out her hand at the viewer, but the shading isn't strong enough for it. The arm looks like it's deformed a little, and she's draping it to her side, while extending her hand. A little darker shading on the palm of the hand where it naturally creases doing that gesture also couldn't hurt. -Khao |
Ok, I looked at it from a distance like you said... and I agree, it does seem a little off. But I can't quite see how to correct it. I think I'll leave it for now and look at it again another day; maybe it'll be more clear to me then.
Thanks again for the assistance.... and watch where you put those hands, mister. >=/
Posted by: DivA Sep 27 2003, 08:36 PM
| QUOTE (Khaotika @ Sep 27 2003, 06:19 PM) |
| *pinches ass* :o |
... -.O
*a silent reaction reveals a partisan poking gently against Khao's back* now Khao, i'm sure you aren't planning to disrespect my dear sister any further, are you? *innocent grin* to do so could prove really hazardous to your health.. ^^
Posted by: Angel of Enders Sep 27 2003, 09:58 PM
PERVERT!!! *runs away* 
Posted by: DarkEpyon Sep 27 2003, 10:01 PM
Each time I see that pic, the 3 words "Baby got back" always pop in.
Posted by: Layrinn Sep 29 2003, 11:02 PM
Gah... why didn't someone tell me I made a typo in my sig? >.<
*corrects it*
Oh wait... I know why... everyone was busy looking somewhere else. >=/
Posted by: Khaotika Oct 1 2003, 11:39 AM
| QUOTE (DivA @ Sep 27 2003, 09:36 PM) | ||
... -.O *a silent reaction reveals a partisan poking gently against Khao's back* now Khao, i'm sure you aren't planning to disrespect my dear sister any further, are you? *innocent grin* to do so could prove really hazardous to your health.. ^^ |
*backflips away* I'll keep that in mind for future reference. ^^
BTW Rinn, what was misspelled? *wipes drool off of keyboard* ;p
-Khao
Posted by: Zorya Oct 2 2003, 11:19 PM
Rinn looks very.....athletic. #>.>#
Posted by: Layrinn Oct 2 2003, 11:57 PM
Thanks Zorya, you should know. ^.~
Just a small update: I moved the caption into the pic itself and added Rinn's shadow.
Posted by: Mute Oct 3 2003, 10:57 AM
Y'know, just a small criticism, but I think the ears should point upward more, if at all possible, and maybe even a tad bit smaller in size. But hey, that's just me. =]
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