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Give Me Your Hand, ^.~ |
 Sep 27 2003, 04:25 PM
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 Grand Armor  Group: Associates Posts: 534 Joined: 12-January 03 Member No.: 15  |
Wow, I got hit with some serious inspiration today... I created this pic from scratch, start to finish, in just a little over four hours. o.O
And for the first time ever, I'm actually happy with how the face turned out. ^.~ 
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Sep 27 2003, 04:31 PM
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 Mistress of Red Magic Group: Arbiter Caste Posts: 1466 Joined: 24-June 03 From: Minneapolis, MN Member No.: 53 |
Nice work Rinn, keep it coming
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 Sep 27 2003, 04:36 PM
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Saw It Coming Group: Associates Posts: 251 Joined: 8-July 03 Member No.: 57 |
Yikes, those eyes are scary! O_o; To make them a lil less scary, lighten up the black lines on the bottom part of the lash, and add eyelids covering a small portion of the top part. I'd add a little more shading on the arm, right now it looks like she's breaking it to reach out her hand.
Nice legs!! *slaps the ass*  -Khao -------------------- Sometimes when I talk to people, I like to imagine a giant "EDIT" button over their head. Not that it matters, I always reach for "DELETE".
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Sep 27 2003, 04:39 PM
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 Revolution to the Destruction Group: Paragon Caste Posts: 2007 Joined: 14-March 03 From: The Black Spiral Member No.: 21 |
Once again, another bang-up job.
-------------------- "Computers are incredibly fast, accurate and stupid. Human beings are incredibly slow, inaccurate and brilliant. Together they are powerful beyond imagination." -Albert Einstein |
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Sep 27 2003, 05:12 PM
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Grand Armor Group: Associates Posts: 534 Joined: 12-January 03 Member No.: 15 |
*o.O* Take it easy there, tiger... ^.^;; Hehe, seriously... thanks for the advice, Khao... =) Have another look and see if you think the eyes are any better. I may give the eyelids a try later, but to be honest I'm afraid if I screw with the pic much more, I'll end up messing it up. ;p I'm not sure what you're getting at about her arm... could you explain a little further, please? Thanks again for the advice... I'm greatful for all the help I can get. =) |
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 Sep 27 2003, 05:19 PM
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Saw It Coming Group: Associates Posts: 251 Joined: 8-July 03 Member No.: 57 |
Oh yeah, much better. These eyes have a nicer, more "come hither" look to them.  As for the arm, it's a little hard to explain. Take a few steps away from the screen and you might see what I'm talking about. The perspective is a bit off, due to lack of shading on parts of the arm. Around the elbow is where I'm mainly focused. She is supposed to be sticking out her hand at the viewer, but the shading isn't strong enough for it. The arm looks like it's deformed a little, and she's draping it to her side, while extending her hand. A little darker shading on the palm of the hand where it naturally creases doing that gesture also couldn't hurt. *pinches ass* :o -Khao -------------------- Sometimes when I talk to people, I like to imagine a giant "EDIT" button over their head. Not that it matters, I always reach for "DELETE".
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Sep 27 2003, 05:32 PM
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Grand Armor Group: Associates Posts: 534 Joined: 12-January 03 Member No.: 15 |
 >.>;;
Ok, I looked at it from a distance like you said... and I agree, it does seem a little off. But I can't quite see how to correct it. I think I'll leave it for now and look at it again another day; maybe it'll be more clear to me then. Thanks again for the assistance.... and watch where you put those hands, mister. >=/ |
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 Sep 27 2003, 08:36 PM
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 Deus-Ex MachinA Group: Neophyte Caste Posts: 668 Joined: 8-June 03 From: everywhere.. Member No.: 44 |
... -.O *a silent reaction reveals a partisan poking gently against Khao's back* now Khao, i'm sure you aren't planning to disrespect my dear sister any further, are you? *innocent grin* to do so could prove really hazardous to your health.. ^^ |
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Sep 27 2003, 09:58 PM
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 Unorthodox Group: Associates Posts: 101 Joined: 13-June 03 From: NY Member No.: 47 |
PERVERT!!! *runs away*
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Sep 27 2003, 10:01 PM
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Revolution to the Destruction Group: Paragon Caste Posts: 2007 Joined: 14-March 03 From: The Black Spiral Member No.: 21 |
Each time I see that pic, the 3 words "Baby got back" always pop in.
-------------------- "Computers are incredibly fast, accurate and stupid. Human beings are incredibly slow, inaccurate and brilliant. Together they are powerful beyond imagination." -Albert Einstein |
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Sep 29 2003, 11:02 PM
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Grand Armor Group: Associates Posts: 534 Joined: 12-January 03 Member No.: 15 |
Gah... why didn't someone tell me I made a typo in my sig? >.<
*corrects it* Oh wait... I know why... everyone was busy looking somewhere else. >=/ |
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 Oct 1 2003, 11:39 AM
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Saw It Coming Group: Associates Posts: 251 Joined: 8-July 03 Member No.: 57 |
*backflips away* I'll keep that in mind for future reference. ^^ BTW Rinn, what was misspelled? *wipes drool off of keyboard* ;p -Khao -------------------- Sometimes when I talk to people, I like to imagine a giant "EDIT" button over their head. Not that it matters, I always reach for "DELETE".
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Oct 2 2003, 11:19 PM
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 Tears for Fears Group: Paragon Caste Posts: 302 Joined: 5-January 03 From: Oklahoma Member No.: 13 |
Rinn looks very.....athletic. #>.>#
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Oct 2 2003, 11:57 PM
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Grand Armor Group: Associates Posts: 534 Joined: 12-January 03 Member No.: 15 |
Thanks Zorya, you should know. ^.~
Just a small update: I moved the caption into the pic itself and added Rinn's shadow. |
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Oct 3 2003, 10:57 AM
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 Sunbro Group: Paragon Caste Posts: 753 Joined: 16-April 03 From: 'Murica Member No.: 25 |
Y'know, just a small criticism, but I think the ears should point upward more, if at all possible, and maybe even a tad bit smaller in size. But hey, that's just me. =]
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